I am in the process of giving you feedback on your 2nd drafts using a software called Yack Pack. This online service allows me to record my feedback and allows you the ability to retrieve it at any time. I would like to have your comments regarding this service. Let me know if you have not received the invitation to the Pack. I took your email from your Turnitin.com account, so hopefully it is correct. What do you think? Have you gotten the invitation or the message about your 2nd draft? Since we had no time for a conference, I think this is a good alternative. Go to http://yackpack.net to learn more.